WALT:use punctuation correct in writing...The magnet monster

 The magnet monster

Once upon a time there was a spooky house, some people say that it was haunted, But nobody knows if the house is haunted…

Bang the bullets flew out of the gun hitting the wall magnet monsters started to attack so I

 flushed them down the toilet with some soap, just then the label peeled off revealing the grow soap label, the toilet began to rumble. The giant magnet monster began to suck up all the world luckily I had a rocket so I went to mars and saw an alien called sam he was a very nice alien…Just then the magnet monster started to suck up mars I got sam and went to the mega universe, where sams family was...

By TAINE URLICH

what should I write about next time

how are ecosystem works

ice storm Taine urlich

His vanes strung like a ukulele his eyes wiggle
when he saw it. The mist swept across the vast ocean sweeping
the birds of there feet and blowing them out to sea. The penguins
huddled up to keep the only warm air in from miles

taine free righting

Swish splash kaboom the dalfin magnificently zooms under the boat and completes a back flip kaboom my Dad threw out a soft bait out on his new rod he complete wound his rod in. he was shocked when it got of...

w.a.l.t: share our learning using screencastify

This is my goal for writing

WALT:write quality not quantity:guppy fish

although these enormous guppy fish has been

caught

he still has a chance of an escape butt right then he

starts to flap his tail and he slides

into the sea then he swims away

Music or Sport

I disagree that music is better than sport ⚽️.sport is better than music because you have fun,win prizes and work together .
When you play sport we all have fun. Did you know That you to run around and have fun ⚽️ in sport and well you get to make friends . I bet that you will have fun at training.this is why sport is better than music.
When you participate in sport you might win a prize. There are lots of prises like trochees , mettle's and money this is why sport is better than music.
In team sport you work together and when we might win or loose and we might come in a tie/draw.

Now do you like sport more then music...

BY TAINE